14.10.16                        

LG: we are learning to recount an exciting event so that our readers know what happened and how we felt.

SS: to include detail ,to use interesting vocabulary ,adjectives verbs adverbs.

                                My school holidays

The bright yellow is for my best friends house when i went to Otorohanga. I got to see my friend for a whole week. It was super fun and her name is Monique and she had a 5 year old sister and a 8 year old brother. I meet her when i first came to Stratford. The black is for there pet dog called molly and she is three years old. When she first saw me she jumped everywhere, licked me , smelt me because i smelt like flowers there. Molly is always exited for new people. the grey is for there baby lamb called hayley and she is the most fluffiest lamb ever. The green is for the bright long grass for the lamb , molly, front and back yard, and for the padics. The blue is for the sky, raindrops, water, and the huge lake i saw at theres. The red is for their motorbike I got to ride on it was super fun and super scary at the same time.